Monday, January 16, 2012

Avery gets transformed.

This starts about a week after Cyndal hires Avery. They are back as the camp where Cyndal's platoon is headquartered, and where they patrol from. The platoon has had a few days to rest and resupply and now is heading out for a patrol.

The next morning, Cyndal lead her troop out. As a fourteen year old non-combatant Avery was assigned to stay behind and see to the wounded, and some supply issues. Just before lunch, she was intercepted by the General’s Aid as she left the supply tent, having dropped off a list.
“You are Avery, Lt. Cyndal’s Orderly?”
“Yes, I am” Avery responded. “Sir.”
He smiled. “As a civilian you don’t need to call me ‘sir’, or anybody else, except Lt. Cyndal. The General has asked to see you. Do you have time?”
“I was just going to eat. But that can wait.”
“Good. Come along then.”
This man was higher in rank than Cyndal, but not a great deal older, and very friendly. However, he kept quiet the rest of the time, except for introducing Avery to the General.
“Come in, and sit down, young lady. I have some questions for you.”
Avery did as bidden.
“From what I have had reported to me, you’ve have a bit of a trial the last several days.”
Avery nodded.
“What would you say, if I told you that I know a way to make it so that what happened to you, could never happen to you again?”
“And how is that?”
“You have seen people change to battle form. Do you know all that the change does to a body?”
“It’s stronger, faster, and has plates of armor.”
“Right. One of those plates of armor can make it so that you can never be raped again.”
“What do you mean?”
“You have seen Lt. Cyndal transform? And the men as well? Well, when that happens, one of the plates that forms covers your private parts, between your legs. So that they cannot be exposed or used until you change back.”
Avery had enough experience on a farm with animals to understand about reproduction, and was not at all naive about sex. But this was a new idea. “You’re talking about giving me a battle form.”
“Yes I am.”
“But that’s not done.”
“Lt. Cyndal’s father once taught me that there is a difference between doing something, or not, because it is right or wrong, and doing it or not, simply because it is or is not done a certain way. I think this would be good for you. The men I’ve talked to say that you’ve been increasingly jumpy, and the women say that this will help. But it’s up to you.”
“Will it mean that I have to fight?”
“No. But we can arrange to teach you that if you want. And if you are going to go out with Lt. Cyndal’s troop, then you will need to know how.”
“Cyndal told me… Um Lt. Cyndal assigned me to see to some requisitions and to see to her wounded men.”
“That can be handled.”
Avery sat quietly thinking, but could come up with no real reason not to do this, and one reason of many to do it: this would really annoy her sisters.
“Ok, then. I’ll do this.”
“Come with me then, and we will start.”
“Right now?”
“Sure. No reason to wait.” The General picked up a piece of paper and stood. “Come on.”
Avery hesitated, then followed. He handed her the paper.
“Read this.”
Avery looked it over. It was a hand written sheet, in a clean script, which started in the middle of a sentence. She scanned to the end and found her own name in the heading to the next paragraph. It detailed the first moments of her meeting Cyndal, and killing two men in her kitchen. Following was a summary of the subsequent events. It concluded with her acceptance of the job of Orderly. The next paragraph was an evaluation of Avery. She read this with careful interest.
‘She is a bright young woman, with lots of potential. Having watched her kill two men in quick succession, with no adverse reaction subsequently, illustrates either that Avery has a dead spot in her soul, or a very live one with a firm sense of justice.’
She read further citations from other adults that knew her, giving honest, positive criticism. The last short paragraph about her was one sentence.
‘It is my opinion that, with proper training, Avery will make a very capable woman, and leader.’
Avery reread this again. Then looked up at where they were, entering a long tent full of machinery. She automatically gave the sheet back when the general held out his hand for it.
“Lt. Cyndal thinks very highly of you, Avery.” He turned to talk with a man there.
Avery just stood there processing what she had read, a pleasant feeling filing her. The Tech got her attention.
“You want me to put her in a mold?” He sounded skeptical.
“She’s physically large enough.”
“Yes, sir. But, it’s simply not done.”
“Well, I am saying to do it.”
Avery recognized a tone of voice from the General that reminded her of when her father wanted something specifically done.
The Tech deflated slightly, and shrugged. “Ok.”
He looked at Avery. “Strip and stand on the scale.” He pointed at one of the booths on the side of the tent.
Avery looked at the General, who nodded, and then she moved to the booth. The general brought her a towel and stepped out, she wrapped this around herself, as the rest of her clothes were stacked on the bench of the otherwise empty booth. She then came out and stepped on the scale. The Tech measured her weight, and height. Then turned to a tray with syringes. He checked one, and looked at the measure on it, and took her arm in hand.
“This will sting.”
He poked the needle into her bicep and pushed about one third of the stuff in, then pulled the needle back out.
“Rub it a bit. It will take a few moments to work.”
He put the needle in a cap, and then broke it off the syringe, which went back onto the tray. He then took her gently by the arm across the tent, toward an open mold. Its cavity looked like the coffins that her parents had been put in. But Avery was already feeling a bit giddy, and lightheaded. She could feel the cold air around her, but was heedless of it. She stepped into the cavity and turned around. The tech pulled a lever outside the doors. An air vent above her head distracted Avery. The general quickly reached in and pulled the towel off her and then darkness enveloped her.
They watched the unit seal, and recline slightly. It then began to hum, and throb as fluid was pumped into it.
“General, with her size, I think it may finish in about seventy hours, not the usual seventy three.”
“Fine. Whenever it happens, let me know.”
“Yes, General.”
They turned and walked away. The General gathered Avery’s clothes, and took them to the laundry, with instructions for them to go to her tent when finished.

Three days later, at lunchtime, the mold-unit signaled its cycle completed. The Tech had planned for this, calling in two female nurses to help Avery. He sent for the General. The Captain came, as the General was busy.
These nurses had never tended people just out of the mold, but all that Avery needed was to wake up, and reestablish her equilibrium. One cracked a vial of smelling salts in front of Avery’s mask. It took a moment, but she roused as they helped her out and onto her hands and knees.
The usual support frame was brought, and Avery took it and stood up. The nurses toweled her off, and the three moved into the booth for privacy. Avery was disoriented, but quickly came to herself. The Captain came into the booth with a drape over his arm, and a looking glass in hand. He looked Avery over from head to toe. Then he handed the drape over, and it was put over her head.
She looked at herself in the glass. Her mask was smooth, with vents on the sides, curving to follow her jaw line and cheeks. A few nubs lined her jaw toward the back. She had a small set of horns above her eyes, with a larger set curving back toward her ears.
She had pauldron plates and rembrace plates, but her forearms were not as fully covered as some, with a spur at her elbow and a pair of thin blades that came off each of her forearm bones. Her hands had barbs at each joint, pointed backward. Her backhand would be nasty. But she lacked the talons that most people had. Her torso and trunk plating was typical, but smoother than what adults had, and her spinal plates had nubs where adults has full, small spikes.
Her wings were also different than normal. Her trailing edge had the first and third digits about the same length as each other, but longer than the others, with the second and forth being shorter than average. Her legs were typically armored, and she had knee pads, but no barbs. There was nothing unusual about her feet, compared to other battle forms; claws on each toe, the larger toe slightly recessed with a larger claw, and standing on the ball and toes.
“I wondered what you would look like. The plates on your back are not as developed as on adults. And your crown does not look as full as it might. But you are still growing. I think it will fill out as you do. Now, let’s go get you some clothes. Do you think you can walk?”
“I’ll try.” Avery’s voice was slightly muffled, as typical for a mask. She started to let go of the frame, when he stopped her.
“You will need to use this, for a bit. Put it a step in front of you, and walk to it.”
She did this, and slowly moved forward, gaining some speed, and confidence. Her wings held high and back, spreading a bit, and her tail moving to balance.
Avery followed the Captain and saw snow on the ground. It had snowed while she had been changing. They went into the supply building, and Avery felt the change of surface under her feet. The temperature didn’t bother her though, she noticed. Just as she had learned she would.
The supply clerk measured her, and dug around finding her an unadorned uniform that was nearly her size. Also she got female undergarments, shoes, leggins and the other sundries for a kit. Then a winter jacket, and a utility belt and harness. Avery put all this on, or stacked it aside. By this point she almost had her balance.
The Captain took her back to the mold-tent, where she was given a cane, and the frame taken away.
“Ok, now. This is the acid test.” He turned to her, as she put her stuff back down. “Focus in your mind on what you look like, not in battle form, and hold that image.”
“Got it.”
“Now. Just like moving a limb. Move your body to that shape.” He changed back and forth to demonstrate.
“Battle form.” He got taller and his wings and tail came out. His feet and hands changed. One set of horns came from the bridge of his nose and around the sides of his head, and another set formed from behind his temples following the first. His mask enclosed his face.
“And back.” His body shrank, and his natural form returned.
Avery did not even look to concentrate. She just suddenly got shorter, her wings folding, and mask receding.
“Like that?”
“Yes. Now go back.”
She did before he finished saying to.
“Very good. You do it as naturally as anybody I have seen do this. Cyndal’s faith is well placed. Now let’s go get this put away, and you some lunch.”

Two days later, Cyndal reported back from her patrol. They had been attacked while out, but none died. Just six walking wounded. As her troop dispersed Cyndal approached the Captain.
“Captain. Where is my aid, Avery?”
“She is with the Flight Instructor.”
“So soon?”
“Didn’t seem like any reason to wait. The girl is a natural. She has plenty of rough edges, but what person that age doesn’t.”
“What range are they on?”
“I believe they are at the towers. Here’s your list of replacements, due in two days. Then you have two weeks of drill before going back out.” He handed her a small pack of papers.
Cyndal took the pack. “Thank you, sir.” She wanted to say more but another troop was mustering. She could either wait or leave.
“Is there something else Lieutenant?”
Cyndal almost said yes. “No sir.”
“Then carry on.” He turned to the assembled troop.
She went to go find her Sergeant, leafing through the pages. She had a full troop with these recruits, including her walking wounded. She found her sergeant and went to the mess tent to go over the T.O. and write her reports.
Avery sat down beside her at dinner, as Cyndal was still there. She had brought Cyndal a tray of food. “Here you go.”
Cyndal looked up. Avery stood at-ease in her unadorned uniform, red-blond hair tied back, cheeks a bit red from exposure. A broad smile counter to her tired eyes. Cyndal inspected her top to bottom.
“Let’s see it.”
Avery changed, as quick as any Cyndal had seen. Cyndal smiled. Her first in two days.
“Looks good. Eat.”
She motioned to Avery’s food with her stylus, which was then exchanged for a fork and started her own. Her sergeants all joined them. The finished trays were given to Avery. Cyndal set her report aside, and they went through their squads, assigning and shifting the men around. Then she read the orders to them. Avery had since returned with warm fruit drink for all. They finished their meeting and Cyndal dismissed all but two sergeants. These two she quizzed on events of the patrol, and then dismissed them. She then finished the reports.
“O.k. Read this, and find the mistakes.” Cyndal handed the report to Avery. “Out loud.” Avery had started to read it silently.
As she encountered unfamiliar words and acronyms Cyndal helped her with these, and also had her note changes.
“The Sergeant used to help me with these. Now it is your job. Eventually I will dictate it to you, and you will write it. But first I need to know how well you can handle language.”
Cyndal then commenced to rewrite the report, over another warm cup of juice. She finished the report, and tossed the first draft into a heat box where it quickly burned to ash. Cyndal went to the command tent and turned the report in.
“That’s done. Now we can get some rest.”
Avery helped Cyndal remove her armor and set it aside, noting where it would need repair. She then was sent for some coals to start their heater.
It was a cloudless night, and very still. The snow was not staying yet, but it was very cold at night.

Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Cyndal meets Avery


This is an excerpt from a story that I have kept close to the vest. The original episode for the Cyndal Character was a rewrite of the Fa Mulan story. I still want to rewrite that portion better, and develop some different characterization than what Disney used. The setting is a colony planet that lost contact thousands of years before, and reverted to semi-industrial agrarian feudal conditions.
Also Cyndal and the related stories feature an idea that spawned from an idea I had watching Gargoyles many years ago: 'what if you gave a Guyver to a gargoyle?' This is part of why I hold this story close. The application of the guyver-inspired transformation is different than that manga, as are the powers and limitations. This episode happens after Cyndal has been at war for two years, and is an officer in charge of a platoon of forty men, all of whom can transform to a 'battle form' that is a hybrid of a gargoyle and a guyver. Also, Cyndal has pre-cognitive abilities, which are activated by the 'battle form', but they are more reflexive than active. This and related ideas are explored more in other stories.

Cyndal ran through the snow, sword ready.  Her men around her, and along the line advancing on the town.  It had been a minor squabble with the Captain to get him to allow her to come with this group.  but her pre-cog flash had shown her plainly this was where she needed to be.
The five men with her easily kept pace, and beyond to either side were more groups.  They had waited for this first day after harvest to make this push.  The four inches of early snow were a bonus.  The enemy was sluggish from the cold and the attack was being made from the unusual direction of crossing the harvested fields.  Bows were still a worry, but the advance group was supposed to have taken care of that during the storm.  The defenses were all arrayed to concentrate on the woods, where Cyndal had been making a lot of trouble for them. So the charge was now at the weakest point of the town’s defenses.
They hopped the rock wall and charged toward the farm house.  Three enemy troopers came out, with more from the barn.  Cyndal and her partner, Bernad, continued to the house, as the other four went in the direction of the barn.  Bernad got to the three first, slashed the closest and moved past to engage the next as Cyndal engaged the third.
She blocked his blow, parrying up and away, and slashed him with her forearm blade as she transformed.  His hand went to his neck, but was already too late, as he spun away to turn the snow red.  Cyndal reverted and continued into the house, crashing through the door and into another enemy.
They tumbled over each other and crashed into the cabinets and the floor.  She was momentarily disarmed, having dropped her sword.  The first thing at hand was a large spoon.  As she got out of the cabinet, its contents crashed down on her, most of its brunt going to her armor.
She sensed peril, and lashed out with her free arm, and found a leg.  She pulled it as it tried to step away.  He slipped out of her grip, but she had time enough to get up as cooking goods and crockery spice pots cascaded down.  He tried to close for a close swing with a short sword, which she missed by slipping on some last jar, and falling again.  Another jar came to hand, which she tossed up at her opponent.
It clunked and irritated, but was only for distraction.  Cyndal finally had her feet under her, and a kitchen knife in one had and the spoon in the other.  The spoon was tossed aside, a slight distraction, and the knife leading a lunging thrust, with a short yell.  The knife skittered on armor, catching and breaking the thin blade.  But Cyndal pressed on with the stub at the man’s face, gouging his cheek deeply.
They crossed the room and thumped into the cabinets there, knocking more jars and powders of all sorts down.  Cyndal backed out briefly, and looked for her sword while drawing out her long knife.  He came out of a cloud of flour, stumbling over the debris on the floor and swung his sword hard at Cyndal.
She dodged the swing, and tried to lunge in, but he stopped her causing her to drop the knife.  He kneed her in the gut and threw her down.  Cyndal was stunned for a moment, unable to breath.  Then the man’s weight fell on her.  She still did not have enough air to breath.  But the man was not moving, and his weight was suddenly a bit less.
Cyndal shook her head to clear it, and looked up to see a girl with fresh blood on her hands and jerkin standing over her.  Cyndal heaved and pulled herself out from under the man, spotted her sword and took it up as she stood up.  The girl stood by the door out of the kitchen to the rest of the house, with a malevolent look of hate cast at the dead trooper.  Cyndal’s long knife was buried most of the way up its blade in the man’s back, through his armor.
Cyndal gulped air for a moment, looking at the mess around her.  She finally spoke to the girl.
“Are there any others here?”
“Only in the barn.”  The voice was full of hurt, and hate.  “They killed my parents, then…”
Cyndal looked her over.  Definitely maturing, but still very much a child.  She was a head shorter than Cyndal, and as muscled as any active farm child.  All she had on was the jerkin.  No trousers or foot wear.  Her stringy long hair looked to be a very light gold, and right out of bed.
“How old are you?”
“Fourteen.”
“Cyndal.”
“Avery.”
Cyndal put her boot on the dead man’s back and her fingers over the crossbar of the knife.  She then gave a sharp tug.  The body jerked a bit as the knife came out.  Suddenly boot steps were coming their way.  Cyndal looked up.  The girl had another knife in her hand.
“Behind you,” Cyndal warned Avery.
The girl waited a moment, then backhanded the knife into the chest of the enemy trooper.  She did not even flinch.  The trooper stumbled, thudded against the door frame, knocking Avery over, and collapsed, not to move on his own again.

Cyndal suddenly realized that she was alone in the house.  She went back to the door, and saw Bernad sprawled out next to two enemy troopers, knives and slashes were liberally spread around.  She stepped out and knelt next to him, and felt his throat.  It was still, but the look of his face was really enough to tell that his soul was gone.  Cyndal stood ready to go to the barn.
“Take me with you.”
For a brief fugue these words echoed across Cyndal’s consciousness, and she sensed that this girl’s future and her own were tied together.  She stopped and turned.
“A battle camp is not place for a girl.”  She watched the girl’s countenance harden in juvenile stubbornness.  “Go clean up.  I’ve got a battle to fight.  We will finish this later.”
Cyndal turned and ran for the barn, just as one of her men came out an upper floor loft door, tackling an enemy.  Her man landed on top, and there was an audible bunch of cracks as multiple bones broke.  Her man screamed, the enemy could only gasp.  Cyndal lay her sword across the neck of the enemy, then saw it a useless gesture, as the man breathed his last.
“Can you move?” She asked.
“I think both arms are broken, and under him.”
“Can you roll over, if I lift him?”
“I’ll try.”
She transformed, and planted her sword and knife blade down in the snow.  She then lifted the shoulders of the dead man, and tilted his body to help her man roll onto his back.  He groaned as his arms flopped about.  His vambraces were smashed, and his gauntlets were mashed, but it looked like everything was in the general right order.  Except that each forearm bent in the wrong direction.
“Well, you’re out for a while.”  Cyndal set the dead man back down.
“Nice.  Could you pull my knife out of his back?”
She rolled the body over, and reverted. The knife had gone in at an angle, so the blade was completely inside.  It took two good yanks to get it loose, and out.  By this point the other three had come out.
“Report.”
“Six dead, no alarm sounded.  You?”
“Three dead outside, two dead inside.  And Bernad is gone.”
They paused a moment.  Then Cyndal pulled them together, and they helped Eph to his feet, wiped his knife clean and sheathed it. “There is a little girl inside.  She is the only survivor.  I think she can help you…clean up.  Go easy on her.  She has been mistreated by these men.”
Eph nodded, and with his arms hanging loose, shuffled toward the house.
Cyndal watched a moment, then turned.  “Let’s go.”